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Post by Wacky32 6th April 2011, 01:59

Welcome to Waterfront City, Linktoria, population 168,000.
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Downtown Waterfont City
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This the brand new, newly built Chevorlet Field, 50,000.
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Waterfront Stadium, 70,000.
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Waterfront City has a great rail system.
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Chevorlet Field at night.
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Waterfront Stadium at night.
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Downtown at night.
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Post by Blakeway4 6th April 2011, 02:45

The Marriott Hotel seriously ruined your pics. Those pics are great!! Maybe a bit too much of Maxis, but it's good. I see some repetition (Maxis...) + Stadiums again?

Well my suggestion is that you download a lot of stuffs from LEX and STEX, ASAP.
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Post by MiguelLeal 6th April 2011, 16:51

Sorry...but I see no improvements... Sad
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Post by Thomas 6th April 2011, 18:51

I only have three questions for you. Please answer them.

Are you happy with these images?
Do you think there's any way you could improve them?
And have you read any of the advice that you've been given, and then taken it on board?
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Post by Evillions 6th April 2011, 23:50

I really recommend you applying to this:
ST City and CJ school

I think you would improve, I'm an active teacher over there so I can give points of improvement for your cities.
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I agree with the previous two posters. Honestly, I haven't seen any improvement of any sort. I'm sorry to be blunt, but this is the facts man.
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Post by Wacky32 7th April 2011, 02:33

I'll give it a shot and I will make progress.
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Post by Thomas 7th April 2011, 19:46

That is good to hear, but I am becoming sceptical. This is the third update where we've seen no improvement, so you are actually going to have to show us improvement before we believe it now.
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Post by Sirron kcuhc 9th April 2011, 17:26

Not too bad. But your city is running on a grid and there is way too much Maxis in your city. I also think that you need to move this CJ away from sports, it's beginning to get quite repetitive having at least one picture of a stadium in every CJ update.
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Post by MiguelLeal 9th April 2011, 21:57

Yes, agree with you. I am tired of this things of sports...
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Post by Evillions 9th April 2011, 22:45

ALL of us are tired of seeing sport and college updates, we want to see your cities and points of interest.

This is it Wacky, sign up at the ST and CJ school by saying that you want to join. You could post an image of your city and teachers will show you where you can improve. Hell, I still learn some new things over there. Trust me, it's the best option you got that can improve your skills.
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Post by Huston 12th April 2011, 06:55

I agree with everyone here too...Less picture of city stadiums, it's become the only thing Linktoria is about, also you may wanna look up on how to transition buildings from high to low, cause the high-rises just clash with small shops and low density housing which is very unrealistic and add some more flora in the city. Just some 2 points you could begin to work on...
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Post by Forsma 12th April 2011, 22:23

I though it's not so bad..
the only thing that I notice is I want to see something other than stadiums.. Smile
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Post by emgmod 13th April 2011, 07:47

Ya know what Waterfront City should have? A waterfront! Laugh


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Post by Wacky32 15th April 2011, 02:20

Give me time. I'll do it. Ok. Give me time.
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Post by Thomas 15th April 2011, 10:16

You've been a member for nearly 7 months now Wacky. You've had a lot of time already. Speechless
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Post by Evillions 15th April 2011, 22:12

Thomas wrote:You've been a member for nearly 7 months now Wacky. You've had a lot of time already. Speechless

Agreed, he has been here as long as me, that's pently of time.
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Post by Wacky32 16th April 2011, 01:41

I've started on the ST & CJ School. Waterfront City is first to be fixed.
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Post by Evillions 16th April 2011, 03:48

Check the reply on ST, I posted some basic improvements that you need. I'll get into detail until you successfully finished the first step.
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Post by MiguelLeal 23rd April 2011, 11:42

How is Wacky? We are really excited to see your improvements! Wink
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Post by Wacky32 1st May 2011, 20:21

Sorry ive been gone, Waterfront City is under "improvement" as i should say, i still have some fix ups to do, but its looking better.

EDIT: Oh what the heck, the highrises are still a little off, I'll get to that, the airport is staying just because i saw someone pointing that its okay to have an airport at the outskirts of town. I added grass plots (yes there are trees, just cant see them) to make things loook nice, I moved Chevorlet Field over for the airport. Probably 2 of the Athletic Village buidlings will be torn down, so here we go (sighs):
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See, theres some actual improvement! Cheeky/Razz
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Post by Evillions 1st May 2011, 20:55

Better yet tear all of them down. Personally, I think those atlectic village buildings are an eyesore.

Better yet, I recommend you seeing my Sandbox update at my CJ. It really shows how to make a small town look pleasing. It was shown at the CJ School.
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Post by will 1st May 2011, 21:30

I'd say that is better. Smile
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Post by Forsma 1st May 2011, 22:34

Just looks like my East Rockcoast application in LoN.. Cheeky/Razz
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Post by Evillions 1st May 2011, 22:53

Again, not bad! Just needs work here and there I guess it would be good.
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Post by Wacky32 2nd May 2011, 01:07

Is this a better Athletes Village? It's gonna be fixed up on the wasteland but, is this better?
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