Day 14
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Daniel
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emgmod
Neil
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Day 14
Introduction
The Union Constitution is one of the most important document of AIN. Once finished, it will be evaluated and ratified by all the current union members. The constitution will serve as a guideline and rulebook for the union.
This discussion only pertains to the preamble and the first part(membership) of the AIN Constitution. Here are the current excerpts:
“As members of the AIN we look forward and back in an ever changing
union to help learn about life, politics, and the human nature like no
school will ever provide. We test the ideals of human ideology both
good and bad, and share our common interest in one game that draws us
from All Corners of the Globe or Any places of the World or Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania to one place to
learn, grow and play. This is the Alliance.
1.1 - Being part of AIN is very easy and simple. In the Welcome section of the forum is a subforum called Nation Application. There, a hopeful applicant makes a thread regarding their application. The basic requirements are flag and an existing City Journal/ Mayor Diaries and of the sort. Then a minimum of five pictures are to be posted in the thread. After that, it is to the discrepancy of the applicant to put whatever information they feel is interesting or important about their country(population, location, language, leaders, and such.)"
Source: Click Here.
Discussion Questions
1. Do you agree with all of the above?
2. Should there be anything added?
3. Should there be anything removed?
4. Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are the founding places of AIN?
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above?
Peter- Honoured Member
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Age : 30
Re: Day 14
1. Do you agree with all of the above?
Yes
2. Should there be anything added?
Not that i can think of that at the moment
3. Should there be anything removed?
Nah
4. Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are the founding places of AIN?
Iowa, Florida, Singapore, Romania. 4 Founding Fathers :p
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above?
None
Yes
2. Should there be anything added?
Not that i can think of that at the moment
3. Should there be anything removed?
Nah
4. Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are the founding places of AIN?
Iowa, Florida, Singapore, Romania. 4 Founding Fathers :p
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above?
None
Saathoff- Prime Minister
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Re: Day 14
I like it - although I think all corners of the globe is more apropriate.
If you want the founding members to have a more dominant feature on the constitution - the four members could scan their personal signatures and add them to the constitution though...
If you want the founding members to have a more dominant feature on the constitution - the four members could scan their personal signatures and add them to the constitution though...
Re: Day 14
1. Do you agree with all of the above?
Yes
2. Should there be anything added?
No
3. Should there be anything removed?
No
4. Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are the founding places of AIN?
Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above?
Fine as is.
Yes
2. Should there be anything added?
No
3. Should there be anything removed?
No
4. Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are the founding places of AIN?
Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above?
Fine as is.
emgmod- High Commissioner
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Re: Day 14
1. Do you agree with all of the above?
Yes
2. Should there be anything added?
No
3. Should there be anything removed?
No
4. Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are the founding places of AIN?
Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above?
None
Yes
2. Should there be anything added?
No
3. Should there be anything removed?
No
4. Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are the founding places of AIN?
Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above?
None
Blakeway4- International Bigwig
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Age : 29
Re: Day 14
Discussion Questions
1. Do you agree with all of the above? YES
2. Should there be anything added? NO
3. Should there be anything removed? NO
4.
Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or
should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are
the founding places of AIN?
I think it should read: All Corners of the Globe, from Iowa and Florida to Singapore and Romania. One place to learn, grow and play. This.... is American Idol (just kidding) the Alliance!
It makes it sound Epic
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above? It's pretty good... who wrote it?
Wooo hooo! 75 Posts! That's alot for me.... I'm very quiet!
1. Do you agree with all of the above? YES
2. Should there be anything added? NO
3. Should there be anything removed? NO
4.
Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or
should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are
the founding places of AIN?
I think it should read: All Corners of the Globe, from Iowa and Florida to Singapore and Romania. One place to learn, grow and play. This.... is American Idol (just kidding) the Alliance!
It makes it sound Epic
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above? It's pretty good... who wrote it?
Wooo hooo! 75 Posts! That's alot for me.... I'm very quiet!
JJ- Permanent Secretary
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Age : 45
Re: Day 14
1. Do you agree with all of the above?
Yep
2. Should there be anything added?
Nope
3. Should there be anything removed?
Nope
4. Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are the founding places of AIN?
All Corners of the Globe - I'm not from Iowa, Florida, Singapore or Romania.
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above?
None
Yep
2. Should there be anything added?
Nope
3. Should there be anything removed?
Nope
4. Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are the founding places of AIN?
All Corners of the Globe - I'm not from Iowa, Florida, Singapore or Romania.
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above?
None
Daniel- On Leave
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Age : 45
Re: Day 14
1. Do you agree with all of the above?
Yes
2. Should there be anything added?
I dont think so
3. Should there be anything removed?
No
4. Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are the founding places of AIN?
Haha, I think the corners of the globe would be best.
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above?
No comment
Yes
2. Should there be anything added?
I dont think so
3. Should there be anything removed?
No
4. Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are the founding places of AIN?
Haha, I think the corners of the globe would be best.
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above?
No comment
Liberater444- Ambassador At Large
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Re: Day 14
Neil, I don't want to be that guy... and maybe because I'm Old, I may not be getting a popular reference. Yes, Bender may be a derogatory term for a homosexual, but here in the US, Faggot is just as derogatory.
JJ- Permanent Secretary
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Age : 45
Re: Day 14
1. Do you agree with all of the above?
Of course.
2. Should there be anything added?
I think everything is pretty good.
3. Should there be anything removed?
Not at all.
4. Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are the founding places of AIN?
I think it should reman as-is. Not specific places.
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above?
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Of course.
2. Should there be anything added?
I think everything is pretty good.
3. Should there be anything removed?
Not at all.
4. Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are the founding places of AIN?
I think it should reman as-is. Not specific places.
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above?
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KoV Liberty- Town Clerk
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Age : 29
Re: Day 14
1. Do you agree with all of the above?
Definitely
2. Should there be anything added?
None
3. Should there be anything removed?
None
4. Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are the founding places of AIN?
It should be "All Corners of the Globe" because it is short, sweet, presentable and I'm from neither of the regions you have just presented. I'm from Nevada.
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above?
Nothing at this time.
Definitely
2. Should there be anything added?
None
3. Should there be anything removed?
None
4. Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are the founding places of AIN?
It should be "All Corners of the Globe" because it is short, sweet, presentable and I'm from neither of the regions you have just presented. I'm from Nevada.
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above?
Nothing at this time.
Re: Day 14
1. Do you agree with all of the above? Maybe
2. Should there be anything added? No
3. Should there be anything removed? Nope
4. Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are the founding places of AIN? All corner of the globe.
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above? Nope
2. Should there be anything added? No
3. Should there be anything removed? Nope
4. Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are the founding places of AIN? All corner of the globe.
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above? Nope
Guest- Guest
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I'm happy with it as it is, and it should be "All Corners of the Globe".
Thomas- Overlord of Eurasia
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Re: Day 14
1. Do you agree with all of the above?
Yup.
2. Should there be anything added?
Nope.
3. Should there be anything removed?
Nope.
4. Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are the founding places of AIN?
I agree with JJ's proposal. ...All corners of the Globe, ranging from Romania to Iowa, Singapore to Florida.
With this sentence structure, it will sounds like the whole world is involved, but 4 "random" countries with significant historical purposes were selected.
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above?
No further comments.
Yup.
2. Should there be anything added?
Nope.
3. Should there be anything removed?
Nope.
4. Notice the bold letters. Should it be "All Corners of the Globe"? Or should it be "Iowa, Florida, Singapore and Romania" because these are the founding places of AIN?
I agree with JJ's proposal. ...All corners of the Globe, ranging from Romania to Iowa, Singapore to Florida.
With this sentence structure, it will sounds like the whole world is involved, but 4 "random" countries with significant historical purposes were selected.
5. What are your comments, suggestions, concerns about the excerpt above?
No further comments.
Aranho- Sovereign
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