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Post by math5515 29th January 2010, 16:43

Information
20,000 people unemploed
1,000,000 people (old capitail 400,000, new capitail 400,000, suburb 200,000
Numbers are based on the 2100 census
religon-70%jew, 30%christian
largest city-bi
Capitial city-beropolis
nationail bird-Robbin
nationail flower-Dasey
national food-Cremy deluxe chetter chesse
natinail song-weels on the bus go round and round
natinal sport-Hocky
Goverment-Democratic (in war-a dictator ship :king: )


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Post by Matt 29th January 2010, 17:16

We need information and pictures from your country.
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Post by math5515 29th January 2010, 18:29

name-beropolis
place's-in westren europe (england today)
Aleksania's old colony (fought independence, won)
pictures of my old capitail bi (largest city)
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sory about the flag changes i keep wanting to make one on paint i think this flag is ok tho
worst airport in the history of airport's
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a ok navy (ready to distroy)
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prihap's the coolest lanch ever!!!!!!!!!!!!
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new capitail (uncomplete)
buliding rush
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cop line up
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living on a bad STREET (CRASH)
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Random pictures of the biggest riot ever!
all of my police cars and fire trucks are there around 160 police cars and 130 fire trucks
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Post by math5515 29th January 2010, 18:32

Also i fought Republic of Aleksania for independence
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Post by Matt 29th January 2010, 18:55

Well, you double posted again. Use the EDIT button !

And regarding your application, if that's all you've got, I can't give you an YES yet.
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Post by Daniel 29th January 2010, 19:23

I'm going to need more detail before I can vote. I will also need to see more detailed pictures. Also, the flag is a bit... um... well... you need a new flag.
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Post by Peter 29th January 2010, 19:30

Hi there, I would like to see more pictures before I make my vote, but seeing as everyone is getting heated, here's a couple of suggestions:
-Please don't double post!
-I need to see more information regarding your country, please.
-Maybe take a look at other applications if you need help with putting things on your application Smile
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Post by anarchy0029 29th January 2010, 19:35

Dude, I need more details before I can determine a vote. It's too vague.
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Post by cormiermax 29th January 2010, 20:13

I say no.
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Post by Saathoff 29th January 2010, 21:43

No. is this a joke? Hate to be exactly honest but your CJing is no where near good quality. I dont know if it even meets bad. Who seriously takes a picture of 2 boxs? DOWNLOAD THE DEPENDENCIES!!!


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Post by Tyler 29th January 2010, 21:48

I'm gonna have to say no... I don't think you're ready yet...
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Post by emgmod 29th January 2010, 21:55

I never knew that boxes can get dilapidated. Also, learn to use Printscreen. It helps with making pictures look less cluttered.
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Post by Saathoff 29th January 2010, 21:57

please vote above
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Post by JJ 29th January 2010, 22:58

I have to say no... I'm a newb too... if you have questions on presentation ask someone i'm sure someone can give you a tip or two.
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Post by anarchy0029 29th January 2010, 23:02

I will say no, but I do believe we should give him some advice of custom content. It seriously needs it.

Download from the following sites.

Simtropolis.com
SC4Devotion
and
SimPeg

You really need some dependencies and mods. Also take a look at other people CJ's and you are welcome to ask here. We are willing to help you. I want to see you as a member, but your work is not yet ready.

Good luck

P.S. I also believe you need a better flag. It doesn't look presentable.
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Post by JJ 29th January 2010, 23:05

very well put, Ray. It's good to give constructive criticism rather than just saying no.
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Post by anarchy0029 29th January 2010, 23:06

Thanks. I don't like to reject those who can have potential. But I have to be honest.
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Post by Saathoff 29th January 2010, 23:16

I assume Berry Boy Voted Yes, I love it. Which that vote doesnt count
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Post by Tyler 29th January 2010, 23:27

or Aleks, being that they are friends... in that case it would count.
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Post by Saathoff 29th January 2010, 23:28

True. Id be nice if Aleks actually post his vote tho so its legit.
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Post by Aleks 29th January 2010, 23:30

opps, forgot to post, i posted needs room for improvement
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Post by Saathoff 29th January 2010, 23:35

Then who voted i love it? Cause that makes means Berry Boy did. Which wont count.
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Post by Blakeway4 29th January 2010, 23:47

yep, they're all right! Cheeky/Razz Don't double posting... I had already the surprise of doing that Sad Banned!
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Post by Peter 30th January 2010, 12:43

Ok, here's my two cents. AIN, look at yourselves! I am disappointed at you guys. You see a begginer's CJ and you all just swoop down and criticize it like crap. I am sure we all started that way, having a not so perfect CJ. Petrova looked like crap when I first started playing. You all need to be give constructive criticism instead of flat out ew's and no's. AND AS FOR THAT ONE VOTE OF YES, ITS ONLY ONE VOTE YES VERSUS A LOT OF NO'S. SERIOUSLY?

Now, berry, for your application. Thanks for your interest for applying. I'm not going to lie, this is not the best application we've seen here. There's a lot of realism issues. First off, the shuttle can't just launch in the middle of the city. Second, there's tall towers built next to small houses. That's not realistic. You should do a leveling system where you have small houses, then small apartments, then medium sized buildings, then high rises. Third, follow what some people said about removing those boxes. Fourth, if you need help with your flag, any one here is glad to help. I want to see more custom content

You have a lot of potential. But I'm going to have to say no. Please dont get discouraged, I'm sure Aleks can help you, and if you looked at his application that he did, you can see he improved a lot! And look at the other applications! So when you feel like you've improved, then you can reaply again Smile
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Post by Blakeway4 30th January 2010, 13:58

I send him a PM of some tricks that I did to upgrade my CJs... Perhaps, doesn't know if he read his PM. (Just press Mail on top Berry Boy)
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