Declined | Beropolis
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JJ
emgmod
Tyler
Saathoff
cormiermax
anarchy0029
Peter
Daniel
Matt
math5515
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Declined | Beropolis
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20,000 people unemploed
1,000,000 people (old capitail 400,000, new capitail 400,000, suburb 200,000
Numbers are based on the 2100 census
religon-70%jew, 30%christian
largest city-bi
Capitial city-beropolis
nationail bird-Robbin
nationail flower-Dasey
national food-Cremy deluxe chetter chesse
natinail song-weels on the bus go round and round
natinal sport-Hocky
Goverment-Democratic (in war-a dictator ship :king: )
20,000 people unemploed
1,000,000 people (old capitail 400,000, new capitail 400,000, suburb 200,000
Numbers are based on the 2100 census
religon-70%jew, 30%christian
largest city-bi
Capitial city-beropolis
nationail bird-Robbin
nationail flower-Dasey
national food-Cremy deluxe chetter chesse
natinail song-weels on the bus go round and round
natinal sport-Hocky
Goverment-Democratic (in war-a dictator ship :king: )
Last edited by math5515 on 12th February 2010, 13:50; edited 9 times in total
math5515- Citizen
- Posts : 47
Age : 27
beropolis
name-beropolis
place's-in westren europe (england today)
Aleksania's old colony (fought independence, won)
pictures of my old capitail bi (largest city)
sory about the flag changes i keep wanting to make one on paint i think this flag is ok tho
worst airport in the history of airport's
a ok navy (ready to distroy)
prihap's the coolest lanch ever!!!!!!!!!!!!
new capitail (uncomplete)
buliding rush
cop line up
living on a bad STREET (CRASH)
Random pictures of the biggest riot ever!
all of my police cars and fire trucks are there around 160 police cars and 130 fire trucks
place's-in westren europe (england today)
Aleksania's old colony (fought independence, won)
pictures of my old capitail bi (largest city)
sory about the flag changes i keep wanting to make one on paint i think this flag is ok tho
worst airport in the history of airport's
a ok navy (ready to distroy)
prihap's the coolest lanch ever!!!!!!!!!!!!
new capitail (uncomplete)
buliding rush
cop line up
living on a bad STREET (CRASH)
Random pictures of the biggest riot ever!
all of my police cars and fire trucks are there around 160 police cars and 130 fire trucks
Last edited by berry boy on 6th February 2010, 16:24; edited 18 times in total
math5515- Citizen
- Posts : 47
Age : 27
Re: Declined | Beropolis
Also i fought Republic of Aleksania for independence
math5515- Citizen
- Posts : 47
Age : 27
Re: Declined | Beropolis
Well, you double posted again. Use the EDIT button !
And regarding your application, if that's all you've got, I can't give you an YES yet.
And regarding your application, if that's all you've got, I can't give you an YES yet.
Re: Declined | Beropolis
I'm going to need more detail before I can vote. I will also need to see more detailed pictures. Also, the flag is a bit... um... well... you need a new flag.
Daniel- On Leave
- Posts : 2333
Age : 45
Re: Declined | Beropolis
Hi there, I would like to see more pictures before I make my vote, but seeing as everyone is getting heated, here's a couple of suggestions:
-Please don't double post!
-I need to see more information regarding your country, please.
-Maybe take a look at other applications if you need help with putting things on your application
-Please don't double post!
-I need to see more information regarding your country, please.
-Maybe take a look at other applications if you need help with putting things on your application
Peter- Honoured Member
- Posts : 2223
Age : 30
Re: Declined | Beropolis
No. is this a joke? Hate to be exactly honest but your CJing is no where near good quality. I dont know if it even meets bad. Who seriously takes a picture of 2 boxs? DOWNLOAD THE DEPENDENCIES!!!
Last edited by Saathoff on 29th January 2010, 21:51; edited 1 time in total
Saathoff- Prime Minister
- Posts : 2373
Re: Declined | Beropolis
I'm gonna have to say no... I don't think you're ready yet...
Tyler- Permanent Ban
- Posts : 1583
Re: Declined | Beropolis
I never knew that boxes can get dilapidated. Also, learn to use Printscreen. It helps with making pictures look less cluttered.
emgmod- High Commissioner
- Posts : 1536
Re: Declined | Beropolis
I have to say no... I'm a newb too... if you have questions on presentation ask someone i'm sure someone can give you a tip or two.
JJ- Permanent Secretary
- Posts : 611
Age : 45
Re: Declined | Beropolis
I will say no, but I do believe we should give him some advice of custom content. It seriously needs it.
Download from the following sites.
Simtropolis.com
SC4Devotion
and
SimPeg
You really need some dependencies and mods. Also take a look at other people CJ's and you are welcome to ask here. We are willing to help you. I want to see you as a member, but your work is not yet ready.
Good luck
P.S. I also believe you need a better flag. It doesn't look presentable.
Download from the following sites.
Simtropolis.com
SC4Devotion
and
SimPeg
You really need some dependencies and mods. Also take a look at other people CJ's and you are welcome to ask here. We are willing to help you. I want to see you as a member, but your work is not yet ready.
Good luck
P.S. I also believe you need a better flag. It doesn't look presentable.
Re: Declined | Beropolis
very well put, Ray. It's good to give constructive criticism rather than just saying no.
JJ- Permanent Secretary
- Posts : 611
Age : 45
Re: Declined | Beropolis
Thanks. I don't like to reject those who can have potential. But I have to be honest.
Re: Declined | Beropolis
I assume Berry Boy Voted Yes, I love it. Which that vote doesnt count
Saathoff- Prime Minister
- Posts : 2373
Re: Declined | Beropolis
or Aleks, being that they are friends... in that case it would count.
Tyler- Permanent Ban
- Posts : 1583
Re: Declined | Beropolis
True. Id be nice if Aleks actually post his vote tho so its legit.
Saathoff- Prime Minister
- Posts : 2373
Re: Declined | Beropolis
Then who voted i love it? Cause that makes means Berry Boy did. Which wont count.
Saathoff- Prime Minister
- Posts : 2373
Re: Declined | Beropolis
yep, they're all right! Don't double posting... I had already the surprise of doing that Banned!
Blakeway4- International Bigwig
- Posts : 5111
Age : 29
Re: Declined | Beropolis
Ok, here's my two cents. AIN, look at yourselves! I am disappointed at you guys. You see a begginer's CJ and you all just swoop down and criticize it like crap. I am sure we all started that way, having a not so perfect CJ. Petrova looked like crap when I first started playing. You all need to be give constructive criticism instead of flat out ew's and no's. AND AS FOR THAT ONE VOTE OF YES, ITS ONLY ONE VOTE YES VERSUS A LOT OF NO'S. SERIOUSLY?
Now, berry, for your application. Thanks for your interest for applying. I'm not going to lie, this is not the best application we've seen here. There's a lot of realism issues. First off, the shuttle can't just launch in the middle of the city. Second, there's tall towers built next to small houses. That's not realistic. You should do a leveling system where you have small houses, then small apartments, then medium sized buildings, then high rises. Third, follow what some people said about removing those boxes. Fourth, if you need help with your flag, any one here is glad to help. I want to see more custom content
You have a lot of potential. But I'm going to have to say no. Please dont get discouraged, I'm sure Aleks can help you, and if you looked at his application that he did, you can see he improved a lot! And look at the other applications! So when you feel like you've improved, then you can reaply again
Now, berry, for your application. Thanks for your interest for applying. I'm not going to lie, this is not the best application we've seen here. There's a lot of realism issues. First off, the shuttle can't just launch in the middle of the city. Second, there's tall towers built next to small houses. That's not realistic. You should do a leveling system where you have small houses, then small apartments, then medium sized buildings, then high rises. Third, follow what some people said about removing those boxes. Fourth, if you need help with your flag, any one here is glad to help. I want to see more custom content
You have a lot of potential. But I'm going to have to say no. Please dont get discouraged, I'm sure Aleks can help you, and if you looked at his application that he did, you can see he improved a lot! And look at the other applications! So when you feel like you've improved, then you can reaply again
Peter- Honoured Member
- Posts : 2223
Age : 30
Re: Declined | Beropolis
I send him a PM of some tricks that I did to upgrade my CJs... Perhaps, doesn't know if he read his PM. (Just press Mail on top Berry Boy)
Blakeway4- International Bigwig
- Posts : 5111
Age : 29
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