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Post by Guest 17th March 2010, 23:37

2,000 people unemployed
1,000,000 people (old capital 400,000, new capital 400,000, suburb 200,000
Numbers are based on the 2100 census
Religon-30%Jew, 70%Christian
Largest city-Chngo
Capital city-chimmy
National sport-gambling
Government-Democratic (in war-a tyranny)
place's-United States
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Post by Neil 17th March 2010, 23:59

Some improvement is required, those tall buildings at the end of the runway are also extremely unrealistic. Whilst you do have custom content there is always some room for more.

As far as realism goes I would say this is pretty unrealistic - the castle in the middle of a modern district and the amusement park spread out in a straight line just doesnt go in your city.

I would recommend planning you city out to flow from suburbs to midrise to high rise to avoid it just dropping off on one side. Also get rid of the UI by pressing the minimise button in the bottom left and downloading this to remove the yellow lines.

For now you should consider these points and re-apply once you've did some fixing up.
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Post by Saathoff 17th March 2010, 23:59

Thread LOCKED. Nice try Math5515.... We got you again.. Maybe you should learn your lesson first. And quit making fake accounts.
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Post by Peter 18th March 2010, 00:03

Hi there and welcome to AIN!

Ok, first off, thanks for your interest in becoming a junior member at AIN. I see a lot of potential with your cities, and I'm guessing you're relatively new at SC? But regardless, here's some advice I want to share with you, if you dont mind. Cheeky/Razz


  1. When taking pictures, it improves the image when you unpause the game and you get rid of the blue info box at the bottom.
  2. Realism issue: airports and high-rises don't really work well in real life 👍
  3. Realism issue: I see high-rises next to small houses. That's not really aesthetically pleasing, no offense haha. But yea, just make sure you dont stick a high rise building in an area full of small houses. Also add some variety to your commercial areas, don't let the game build 5 thousand of the same building in one place Cheeky/Razz
  4. I'm sensing a vanilla CJ. Meaning that you are using mainly maxis landmarks, some of which aren't really in places you would see them in real life. I suggest going to ST or SC4 Devotion and getting more custom content. But I love the whole Vegas thing you have going on in your cities!!
  5. Aesthetic issue: the flag, its not bad, but maybe you can ask one of our flag specialists here at AIN and they can whip you up a more professional flag in no time(talk to Aranho for more info)


This isn't a bad CJ at all and please dont take my advice the wrong way, my cities looked worse than yours when I first started! But with time and patience, you will have beautiful cities! If you need help with inspiration, please feel free to look around our City Notebooks section or the member applications that have been accepted Smile Right now, my answer is no, sorry man!


OMG ARE YOU KIDDINGG MEE??? GAAHHH I SPENT LIKE HALF AN HOUR TRYING TO MAKE A NICELY WORDED RESPONSE TO THE APPLICATION, THEN I FIND OUT THAT THIS THE SAME PERSON WHO'S BANNED.. GAHHH LOL, thanks for the heads up nate Cheeky/Razz
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Post by Saathoff 18th March 2010, 00:05

no problem. Math5515 your getting kind of pathetic... Thats all the nicer words i got for you. And its odd we can reply to a locked thread Cheeky/Razz
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