Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
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Should South Zagoria be accepted into the AIN?
Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
Flag
Coat of Arms
Geographic
Country Information:
Capital: Barnaul
-Population 410,710
-Founded 1806
Government: Socialist Conservative
-Head(s)of the state: Government, President Jessie Adelaar
-Terms of Office: South Barnaul
Budget: 10,056,236,900
Official Name: People's Republic of South Zagoria
Shortend name: South Zagoria
Country population: 1,325,717
Highest Point: 215 M
History:
1803: South Zagoria was founded
1804: First High Chancellor Named
1806: Barnaul was founded
1811: Barnaul became country's capital
1817: Russians invaded
1828: Zagorians surrendered
1855: National revolt
1899: First highway constructed
1917: Russian civil war
1930: South Zagoria became Stalin's political prison
1941: World war II
1945: Victory!
1980: Unrest in Barnaul
1988: Zagorian civil war
1991: South Zagoria became independent
1999: South Zagoria went from Communist to Socialist Conservative
2008: Jessie Adelaar elected
2010: South Zagoria wants to join the AOIN
In 1980 unrest started in Barnaul. After more than a century of occupation the Zagorians were pissed on the Russians. On the 25th of may 1980 they grabbed the weapons. In just 2 weeks the entire city was liberated. This liberation triggered the events that eventualy led to the bloody Zagorian Civil war. In 1988 the Soviet Union was on the brink of economic ruin people trouguot the country started revolting. But not as bad as the Zagorians. On the 20th of february 1988 the fighters attacked the city of kamyshavko in the north. The soviets were suprised this happend. After this happend everything went highspeed. In just 3 years they gained there independence. After 100 years the Russians were gone and South Zagoria Lived
BEHOLD SOUTH ZAGORIA
this picture was taken before i used a decent water mod
Coat of Arms
Geographic
Country Information:
Capital: Barnaul
-Population 410,710
-Founded 1806
Government: Socialist Conservative
-Head(s)of the state: Government, President Jessie Adelaar
-Terms of Office: South Barnaul
Budget: 10,056,236,900
Official Name: People's Republic of South Zagoria
Shortend name: South Zagoria
Country population: 1,325,717
Highest Point: 215 M
History:
1803: South Zagoria was founded
1804: First High Chancellor Named
1806: Barnaul was founded
1811: Barnaul became country's capital
1817: Russians invaded
1828: Zagorians surrendered
1855: National revolt
1899: First highway constructed
1917: Russian civil war
1930: South Zagoria became Stalin's political prison
1941: World war II
1945: Victory!
1980: Unrest in Barnaul
1988: Zagorian civil war
1991: South Zagoria became independent
1999: South Zagoria went from Communist to Socialist Conservative
2008: Jessie Adelaar elected
2010: South Zagoria wants to join the AOIN
In 1980 unrest started in Barnaul. After more than a century of occupation the Zagorians were pissed on the Russians. On the 25th of may 1980 they grabbed the weapons. In just 2 weeks the entire city was liberated. This liberation triggered the events that eventualy led to the bloody Zagorian Civil war. In 1988 the Soviet Union was on the brink of economic ruin people trouguot the country started revolting. But not as bad as the Zagorians. On the 20th of february 1988 the fighters attacked the city of kamyshavko in the north. The soviets were suprised this happend. After this happend everything went highspeed. In just 3 years they gained there independence. After 100 years the Russians were gone and South Zagoria Lived
BEHOLD SOUTH ZAGORIA
this picture was taken before i used a decent water mod
Last edited by bluedon on 5th September 2010, 19:32; edited 9 times in total
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
COLOUR CODE
Green means you have completed this to a good standard and no improvements are required to progress
Orange means you have completed this to a reasonable standard but this will need to be improved on whilst you are a junior member (in other words, this must turn green before applying for full membership)
Red means this has been completed to a poor standard and will need to be improved before your application can progress
Bolded black means that this has not been included in your application and therefore you will need to provide evidence before your application can progress. In the secondary list, you will only have to provide evidence if you have not provided four other greens/oranges
ESSENTIAL PREREQUISITES (YOU MUST HAVE ALL OF THESE GREEN)
A minimum of ten in-game pictures of your nation
A unique and realistic flag of your nation
A unique and realistic coat of arms for your nation
A map of your nation's location that does not overlap with an existing AIN nation and is realistic to your CJ style
A type of government that again matches your CJ style
A realistic size and population of your nation
No in-game UI
A reasonable ratio of custom content to maxis provided content (50/50 minimum), as that there is little repetition and a constant style of architecture
A detailed and realistic context (history) for your nation
The Network Addon Mod (NAM)
SUPPLEMENTARY PREREQUISITES (AT LEAST FOUR OF THESE MUST BE GREEN)
A custom terrain mod
Previous, positive and active contribution to the AIN
Attention to detail
A custom water mod
A decent amount of realism (no airports ending with a mountain or skyscrapers in the middle of a small town)
Regular updates and commitment to an external city journal (on either Simtropolis, SC4Devotion, SimPeg or Simsports, links required)
Active participation in a previous union (links required)
Have hosted a community event (must have been on a previous union or a site such as Simtropolis, SC4Devotion or Simsports, links required)
Realistic transport network appropriate to your city style and location (maps or pictures should be provided)
Custom Trees
Decent attempt at custom BATs/lots (pictures required)
Green means you have completed this to a good standard and no improvements are required to progress
Orange means you have completed this to a reasonable standard but this will need to be improved on whilst you are a junior member (in other words, this must turn green before applying for full membership)
Red means this has been completed to a poor standard and will need to be improved before your application can progress
Bolded black means that this has not been included in your application and therefore you will need to provide evidence before your application can progress. In the secondary list, you will only have to provide evidence if you have not provided four other greens/oranges
ESSENTIAL PREREQUISITES (YOU MUST HAVE ALL OF THESE GREEN)
A minimum of ten in-game pictures of your nation
A unique and realistic flag of your nation
A unique and realistic coat of arms for your nation
A map of your nation's location that does not overlap with an existing AIN nation and is realistic to your CJ style
A type of government that again matches your CJ style
A realistic size and population of your nation
No in-game UI
A reasonable ratio of custom content to maxis provided content (50/50 minimum), as that there is little repetition and a constant style of architecture
A detailed and realistic context (history) for your nation
The Network Addon Mod (NAM)
SUPPLEMENTARY PREREQUISITES (AT LEAST FOUR OF THESE MUST BE GREEN)
A custom terrain mod
Previous, positive and active contribution to the AIN
Attention to detail
A custom water mod
A decent amount of realism (no airports ending with a mountain or skyscrapers in the middle of a small town)
Regular updates and commitment to an external city journal (on either Simtropolis, SC4Devotion, SimPeg or Simsports, links required)
Active participation in a previous union (links required)
Have hosted a community event (must have been on a previous union or a site such as Simtropolis, SC4Devotion or Simsports, links required)
Realistic transport network appropriate to your city style and location (maps or pictures should be provided)
Custom Trees
Decent attempt at custom BATs/lots (pictures required)
Last edited by danspaceman on 4th September 2010, 17:43; edited 12 times in total
Daniel- On Leave
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
Thanks Daniel
No in-game UI means the UDI Icons
No in-game UI means the UDI Icons
Kevin- Prime Minister
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
Ah. Thanks, Kevin.
Also, bluedon - you sent me an abusive message. You have been warned and you will not receive another warning. We are happy to appraise your application and assist you in any way we can to improve your application, but if you send another message like that to me or any other member, you will be banned permanently.
Also, bluedon - you sent me an abusive message. You have been warned and you will not receive another warning. We are happy to appraise your application and assist you in any way we can to improve your application, but if you send another message like that to me or any other member, you will be banned permanently.
Daniel- On Leave
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
danspaceman wrote:Ah. Thanks, Kevin.
Also, bluedon - you sent me an abusive message. You have been warned and you will not receive another warning. We are happy to appraise your application and assist you in any way we can to improve your application, but if you send another message like that to me or any other member, you will be banned permanently.
What did he say? Just curious
Kevin- Prime Minister
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
Check your inbox. I sent a copy, along with my response, to all admins. He has since apologised and I have accepted his apology.
Daniel- On Leave
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
danspaceman wrote:Check your inbox. I sent a copy, along with my response, to all admins. He has since apologised and I have accepted his apology.
Seconded. He feels repentant, along with wanting us to approve his application
Kevin- Prime Minister
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
Yes, he has made some major improvements to his application. I have explained the membership approval process to him and offered some words of encouragement, along with reassuring him that using mods is not cheating. I told him that mods help make the game more realistic.
Daniel- On Leave
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
Nice Aplicattion but you will need some improvements because you lots of Maxis buildings.
MiguelLeal- Chancellor
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
He has the NAM, I see STR and RHW.
Cyclone-1001- Councillor
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
Yes...he does have NAM....see the road overpass?
Edge- Chargé d'Affaires
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
Completely acceptable for Jr.Membership, the history should be a bit more detailed but thats all. Unless that message reveals problems with his conduct...
Spy9600- Counsel
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
I don't really get your map, where is your nation exactly?
Blakeway4- International Bigwig
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
Welcome to AIN bluedon! Thanks for applying to AIN and once you fulfill all the primary list requirements, we will start the voting. And I'm also glad that you and Dan have patched things up....however the next time you disrepect another member, then you will be banned unfortunately.
Peter- Honoured Member
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
I have updated the checklist to reflect that he has NAM. So, all that remains is for him to expand his history a bit and we can start voting.
Bluedon - All that is required is that you write a sentence or two about the events that you have listed in your nation's history. For example, where it says that South Zagoria gained independence, you might like to write what this involved.
Okay, green lights across the board. If the admins agree, this application is ready to be voted on.
Okay, green lights across the board. If the admins agree, this application is ready to be voted on.
Daniel- On Leave
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
First of all, thanks for applying to the AIN. With the checklist fulfilled, you can now go ahead to voting. And it's a yes from me, you have a nice nation.
Thomas- Overlord of Eurasia
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
In my opinion, I think your growable areas, specifically low-density housing and industrial (agriculture) could have a little more custom content. Although your downtown and your river (pic 9.02) look splendid, you have a great use of the STR, which I love seeing, in short, most of your application looks splendid.
I vote YES.
I vote YES.
K50 Dude- Permanent Secretary
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
I vote NO. Sorry. You don't have a complete application since I don't see a readable map + if what I think is right, there's some realism issues. So, please provide us a readable map (with exact borders).
Blakeway4- International Bigwig
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
I would like the map as well, although Julien, may I ask what realism issues stuck out to you?
K50 Dude- Permanent Secretary
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
You have a yes from me, although I think you need to fix your budget. That isn't really a problem, so good luck!
Cyclone-1001- Councillor
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
I vote NO because he needs a bit more work on his zoning...and realism, since he is on the Russian-Mongolian border, which doesn't fit with his housing choice.
Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
Thanks for the map, but I still vote NO. :GG:
Your CBD is way too "tall" for a nation of 417,000 people.
Here's a big city near your nation (but in Siberia, Russia):
This was Irkustk. You should inspire your nation with the region where it is and the surrounding nations.
I'm sorry, but this is my opinion.
Your CBD is way too "tall" for a nation of 417,000 people.
Here's a big city near your nation (but in Siberia, Russia):
This was Irkustk. You should inspire your nation with the region where it is and the surrounding nations.
I'm sorry, but this is my opinion.
Blakeway4- International Bigwig
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Re: Declined: Junior Membership | South Zagoria
Julien 417,000 is my capitals population and i dont care with that my country should look like siberia i just know how to build cities.
not everything is realistic for example:
2004: Greece become EUROPEAN CHAMPIONS
2008: Obama new president
1974 1978 2010: HOLLAND! in world cup finals
and ofcourse i have some siberian styles
I have mountains
In the winter i always download the snow mod (Gives me a warm feeling )
I have ugly industries
But my city just is modern
not everything is realistic for example:
2004: Greece become EUROPEAN CHAMPIONS
2008: Obama new president
1974 1978 2010: HOLLAND! in world cup finals
and ofcourse i have some siberian styles
I have mountains
In the winter i always download the snow mod (Gives me a warm feeling )
I have ugly industries
But my city just is modern
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