Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
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Should the Dolgarian Federation join the AIN?
Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
Application for Dolgarian Federation to join the Alliance of Independent Nations
National Flag
National Coat of Arms
Location
National Anthem
National FactFile
Nation Name – Federal Republic of Dolgaria (Dolgavas Federācija)
Nation Name – Dolgarija (Dolgava)
National Anthem- Saule, Pērkons,Daugava.
National Motto: For freedom an fatherland ( TĒVZEMEI UN BRĪVĪBAI)
Capital: Sirisho 2.345.221
Government: Federal Republic
Head(s) of State: Ernest Martin Koivo
Offical Language(s): Dolgarian, Latvian, Lithuanian, Russian, English.
Population:7,581,272
Area: 175,015 km2
Climate:[b]Humid Continental
GDP ($ - Per Capita):22,141.02
Drives on the: Right
Internet TLD:.DG
Telephone Code:+377
History:In the ninth century, the Baltic nations formed an association to protect the region from the Scandinavian invasion. Ten nations Leitrim, Semigal, Donegal, Karzon, Bromea, Augszeme, Vidsleja, Kursija, Libava, Dolmara Created a new union - The Kingdom of Dolgava. Kingdom's name was created from the river of Daugava. which is the largest river in the region. Only with this union The Baltic region has been safeguarded.
After the battle was crowned the first king of Dolgavas Kingdom.
Great Martins became the first king of Dolgavas Kingdom. .
In 1287 Sirisho, Karzon, Sarho and Brome, Dolgavas four largest cities becomes Hans union member. By this time Dolgavas Kingdom began an economic growth.
In 1500 Dolgava get three overseas colonies Trinidada and Tobago (careabien region), Gambia (West Africa).
1891 -civil war begins among nations Semigal and Leitrim. Dolgavas kingdom splits into two hostile sides.At this time Dolgava lost the overseas colonies. 1901 has formed two republics, Dolgarian Republic, Semigal and Donegal Republic
At the First World War, botho republics stayed as a neutral territories.
But at the Second World War, in 1941 both countries was conquered by Nazi Germans. But in 1945 with Soviet Union help both countries gained freedom.
After Second World War was formed Dolgarian Federation, with all historycal nations-Leitrim, Semigal, Donegal, Karzon, Bromea, Augszeme, Vidsleja, Kursija, Libava, Dolmara.
Sorry about my English i know it terrible...
National Flag
National Coat of Arms
Location
National Anthem
National FactFile
Nation Name – Federal Republic of Dolgaria (Dolgavas Federācija)
Nation Name – Dolgarija (Dolgava)
National Anthem- Saule, Pērkons,Daugava.
National Motto: For freedom an fatherland ( TĒVZEMEI UN BRĪVĪBAI)
Capital: Sirisho 2.345.221
Government: Federal Republic
Head(s) of State: Ernest Martin Koivo
Offical Language(s): Dolgarian, Latvian, Lithuanian, Russian, English.
Population:7,581,272
Area: 175,015 km2
Climate:[b]Humid Continental
GDP ($ - Per Capita):22,141.02
Drives on the: Right
Internet TLD:.DG
Telephone Code:+377
History:In the ninth century, the Baltic nations formed an association to protect the region from the Scandinavian invasion. Ten nations Leitrim, Semigal, Donegal, Karzon, Bromea, Augszeme, Vidsleja, Kursija, Libava, Dolmara Created a new union - The Kingdom of Dolgava. Kingdom's name was created from the river of Daugava. which is the largest river in the region. Only with this union The Baltic region has been safeguarded.
After the battle was crowned the first king of Dolgavas Kingdom.
Great Martins became the first king of Dolgavas Kingdom. .
In 1287 Sirisho, Karzon, Sarho and Brome, Dolgavas four largest cities becomes Hans union member. By this time Dolgavas Kingdom began an economic growth.
In 1500 Dolgava get three overseas colonies Trinidada and Tobago (careabien region), Gambia (West Africa).
1891 -civil war begins among nations Semigal and Leitrim. Dolgavas kingdom splits into two hostile sides.At this time Dolgava lost the overseas colonies. 1901 has formed two republics, Dolgarian Republic, Semigal and Donegal Republic
At the First World War, botho republics stayed as a neutral territories.
But at the Second World War, in 1941 both countries was conquered by Nazi Germans. But in 1945 with Soviet Union help both countries gained freedom.
After Second World War was formed Dolgarian Federation, with all historycal nations-Leitrim, Semigal, Donegal, Karzon, Bromea, Augszeme, Vidsleja, Kursija, Libava, Dolmara.
Sorry about my English i know it terrible...
Last edited by Thomas on 23rd December 2010, 11:14; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Change the History.)
Guest- Guest
Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
First of all, welcome to the forums!
Here is a bit of feedback from me
First off, you need some seawalls. They will make that coast line and that island beautiful.
Second, some more custom medium-density commercial.
Third, you need to develop a lot more low-density commercial and residential between those cities.
Finally, that big castle on the hill is a little strange....
Besides that, personally, I like it!
Here is a bit of feedback from me
First off, you need some seawalls. They will make that coast line and that island beautiful.
Second, some more custom medium-density commercial.
Third, you need to develop a lot more low-density commercial and residential between those cities.
Finally, that big castle on the hill is a little strange....
Besides that, personally, I like it!
K50 Dude- Permanent Secretary
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Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
Thanks for your review i will keep in mind it..
Guest- Guest
Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
I second whatever K50 Dude just said. Also, I feel concerned about the repetition in you downtown. Clean that up a little, will you? That will make your cities look tons more realistic.
But its looking good so far!
But its looking good so far!
Kevin- Prime Minister
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Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
I agree, you need to use seawalls. But its looks good.
Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
Aaaaaa welcome to the forum but i have problems whit the history. :In 1914 the two republics has invading by Nazi Germans: Well if only this be changed well i will be ok. Because well it is totally incorrect.
hiigarar- Ambassador At Large
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Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
Indeed. The Nazi Party didn't form until the 1930s.
Apart from that, it's okay. It does seem a bit... homogeneous in that there seem to be skyscrapers and not much else. Given the region that it's in, this seems a bit unrealistic.
I also think the airport needs a bit of work, though I do like the fact that you managed to get your own airline in the game.
Apart from that, it's okay. It does seem a bit... homogeneous in that there seem to be skyscrapers and not much else. Given the region that it's in, this seems a bit unrealistic.
I also think the airport needs a bit of work, though I do like the fact that you managed to get your own airline in the game.
Daniel- On Leave
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Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
Firstly, welcome to the AIN and thank you for applying!
I agree with what the others have said really, take a look around Simtropolis and Simcity4Devotion for some more midrise residential and commercial buildings, because it does seem to be only skyscrapers and not many rural or lowrise districts are present.
Use some of the City Notebooks for guidance and inspiration, and take a look around the Accepted Applications as well.
I won't post the Checklist yet since you appear to want to edit and improve some things, judging by your posts. And if you have any further questions, just PM myself or any other member of the site and I'm sure we'll be willing to help you out.
I agree with what the others have said really, take a look around Simtropolis and Simcity4Devotion for some more midrise residential and commercial buildings, because it does seem to be only skyscrapers and not many rural or lowrise districts are present.
Use some of the City Notebooks for guidance and inspiration, and take a look around the Accepted Applications as well.
I won't post the Checklist yet since you appear to want to edit and improve some things, judging by your posts. And if you have any further questions, just PM myself or any other member of the site and I'm sure we'll be willing to help you out.
Thomas- Overlord of Eurasia
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Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
Thanks for the advice I will start to improve my region..
Guest- Guest
Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
What about doing a download of an water mod?
MiguelLeal- Chancellor
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Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
By the way, where did you get the apartments in the top-right corner of the first picture? They're awesome.
Thomas- Overlord of Eurasia
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Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
Welcome, I like the location and all of your nation! Great job! But the only thing that doesn't get good with me is the forest of tall buildings. Your nation is in East Europe, please be realistic with the location
Riga:
Tallinn:
Vilnius:
My suggestion is simply to make a mix of modern and old.
Good luck and hope to see you back soon! It is promising!
Riga:
Tallinn:
Vilnius:
My suggestion is simply to make a mix of modern and old.
Good luck and hope to see you back soon! It is promising!
Blakeway4- International Bigwig
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Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
Looks good, a good start. My suggestions-
1- Get a water mod and a terrain mod. Simple and effective.
2- Break up the repetition.
3- No large countries are 100% city. Include suburbs and rural area.
If you get those, it will be 2-3 times better.
1- Get a water mod and a terrain mod. Simple and effective.
2- Break up the repetition.
3- No large countries are 100% city. Include suburbs and rural area.
If you get those, it will be 2-3 times better.
Cyclone-1001- Councillor
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Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
On second look, I think you need a bit of a location change of your country. As Julien said, your city doesn't match up with the culture of your location IRL. Could you move it farther West?
K50 Dude- Permanent Secretary
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Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
Last edited by rolis2004 on 17th September 2010, 15:36; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : updates)
Guest- Guest
Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
Wow! That latest pic looks absolutely awesome!
Daniel- On Leave
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Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
I see an improvement that made your nation 2x better.
Cyclone-1001- Councillor
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Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
Much better, keep going with these rapid improvements and you'll be a member in no time! You also seem very dedicated, which will be very useful in deciding your "Yes" vote.
Thomas- Overlord of Eurasia
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absolutely beautiful
Blakeway4- International Bigwig
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Tyler- Permanent Ban
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Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
Sorry but i really dont know where i get it....Thomas wrote:By the way, where did you get the apartments in the top-right corner of the first picture? They're awesome.
Guest- Guest
Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
Oh boy, that is a vast improvement!
Few more things...
1) Did you really get a terrain mod it only looks like the cliff mod to me.
2) In the last picture, your areas around the river and administrative area look REALLY hilly, and really rough around the river.
3) I think you should get that river out, personally. I see the Japan River Project set there. Although the river looks nice too! (except for those cliffs, those need to go. Have you seen the "soften" tool in god mode? You can access the real god mode again by using CTRL+ALT+SHIFT+god mode button )
I really like how you keep improving, I think a little more work and you are an easy yes from me!
Also, you are going to be asked this sooner or later.... how active do you think you will be?
Lastly, watch the double post. There is an edit button for that use, the admins don't like double posts that much. Not your fault, you didn't know, just don't let that happen again
Few more things...
1) Did you really get a terrain mod it only looks like the cliff mod to me.
2) In the last picture, your areas around the river and administrative area look REALLY hilly, and really rough around the river.
3) I think you should get that river out, personally. I see the Japan River Project set there. Although the river looks nice too! (except for those cliffs, those need to go. Have you seen the "soften" tool in god mode? You can access the real god mode again by using CTRL+ALT+SHIFT+god mode button )
I really like how you keep improving, I think a little more work and you are an easy yes from me!
Also, you are going to be asked this sooner or later.... how active do you think you will be?
Lastly, watch the double post. There is an edit button for that use, the admins don't like double posts that much. Not your fault, you didn't know, just don't let that happen again
K50 Dude- Permanent Secretary
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Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
I don't think the cliffs really need to go.. around here there are rivers without nice "softened" beaches.. and in the southwest there are tons of those so it's not like it's a bad thing.
Tyler- Permanent Ban
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Re: Approved: Associate Membership | Dolgarian Federation
but in the southwest there aren't cities by the rivers with cliffsTyler wrote:I don't think the cliffs really need to go.. around here there are rivers without nice "softened" beaches.. and in the southwest there are tons of those so it's not like it's a bad thing.
K50 Dude- Permanent Secretary
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