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Post by Guest 14th September 2010, 14:41

Application for Dolgarian Federation to join the Alliance of Independent Nations
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Nation Name – Federal Republic of Dolgaria (Dolgavas Federācija)
Nation Name – Dolgarija (Dolgava)
National Anthem- Saule, Pērkons,Daugava.
National Motto: For freedom an fatherland ( TĒVZEMEI UN BRĪVĪBAI)
Capital: Sirisho 2.345.221
Government: Federal Republic
Head(s) of State: Ernest Martin Koivo
Offical Language(s): Dolgarian, Latvian, Lithuanian, Russian, English.
Population:7,581,272
Area: 175,015 km2
Climate:[b]Humid Continental

GDP ($ - Per Capita):22,141.02
Drives on the: Right
Internet TLD:.DG
Telephone Code:+377

History:In the ninth century, the Baltic nations formed an association to protect the region from the Scandinavian invasion. Ten nations Leitrim, Semigal, Donegal, Karzon, Bromea, Augszeme, Vidsleja, Kursija, Libava, Dolmara Created a new union - The Kingdom of Dolgava. Kingdom's name was created from the river of Daugava. which is the largest river in the region. Only with this union The Baltic region has been safeguarded.
After the battle was crowned the first king of Dolgavas Kingdom.
Great Martins became the first king of Dolgavas Kingdom. .
In 1287 Sirisho, Karzon, Sarho and Brome, Dolgavas four largest cities becomes Hans union member. By this time Dolgavas Kingdom began an economic growth.
In 1500 Dolgava get three overseas colonies Trinidada and Tobago (careabien region), Gambia (West Africa).
1891 -civil war begins among nations Semigal and Leitrim. Dolgavas kingdom splits into two hostile sides.At this time Dolgava lost the overseas colonies. 1901 has formed two republics, Dolgarian Republic, Semigal and Donegal Republic
At the First World War, botho republics stayed as a neutral territories.
But at the Second World War, in 1941 both countries was conquered by Nazi Germans. But in 1945 with Soviet Union help both countries gained freedom.
After Second World War was formed Dolgarian Federation, with all historycal nations-Leitrim, Semigal, Donegal, Karzon, Bromea, Augszeme, Vidsleja, Kursija, Libava, Dolmara.



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Post by K50 Dude 14th September 2010, 14:54

First of all, welcome to the forums!

Here is a bit of feedback from me
First off, you need some seawalls. They will make that coast line and that island beautiful.
Second, some more custom medium-density commercial.
Third, you need to develop a lot more low-density commercial and residential between those cities.
Finally, that big castle on the hill is a little strange....

Besides that, personally, I like it! 👍
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Post by Guest 14th September 2010, 14:59

Thanks for your review i will keep in mind it.. Smile
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Post by Kevin 14th September 2010, 15:08

I second whatever K50 Dude just said. Also, I feel concerned about the repetition in you downtown. Clean that up a little, will you? That will make your cities look tons more realistic.

But its looking good so far!
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Post by Forsma 14th September 2010, 15:11

I agree, you need to use seawalls. But its looks good. 👍
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Post by hiigarar 14th September 2010, 17:19

Aaaaaa welcome to the forum but i have problems whit the history. :In 1914 the two republics has invading by Nazi Germans: Well if only this be changed well i will be ok. Because well it is totally incorrect.
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Post by Daniel 14th September 2010, 17:22

Indeed. The Nazi Party didn't form until the 1930s.

Apart from that, it's okay. It does seem a bit... homogeneous in that there seem to be skyscrapers and not much else. Given the region that it's in, this seems a bit unrealistic.

I also think the airport needs a bit of work, though I do like the fact that you managed to get your own airline in the game.
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Post by Thomas 14th September 2010, 18:21

Firstly, welcome to the AIN and thank you for applying!
I agree with what the others have said really, take a look around Simtropolis and Simcity4Devotion for some more midrise residential and commercial buildings, because it does seem to be only skyscrapers and not many rural or lowrise districts are present.
Use some of the City Notebooks for guidance and inspiration, and take a look around the Accepted Applications as well.

I won't post the Checklist yet since you appear to want to edit and improve some things, judging by your posts. And if you have any further questions, just PM myself or any other member of the site and I'm sure we'll be willing to help you out. Smile
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Post by Guest 14th September 2010, 19:53

Thanks for the advice I will start to improve my region.. Smile
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Post by MiguelLeal 14th September 2010, 20:03

What about doing a download of an water mod?
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Post by Thomas 14th September 2010, 20:34

By the way, where did you get the apartments in the top-right corner of the first picture? They're awesome.
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Post by Blakeway4 14th September 2010, 21:55

Welcome, I like the location and all of your nation! Laugh Great job! But the only thing that doesn't get good with me is the forest of tall buildings. Your nation is in East Europe, please be realistic with the location Smile

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My suggestion is simply to make a mix of modern and old. Smile

Good luck and hope to see you back soon! It is promising!
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Post by Cyclone-1001 14th September 2010, 22:00

Looks good, a good start. My suggestions-
1- Get a water mod and a terrain mod. Simple and effective.
2- Break up the repetition.
3- No large countries are 100% city. Include suburbs and rural area.

If you get those, it will be 2-3 times better.
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Post by K50 Dude 15th September 2010, 06:01

On second look, I think you need a bit of a location change of your country. As Julien said, your city doesn't match up with the culture of your location IRL. Wink Could you move it farther West?
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Post by Guest 15th September 2010, 08:43

Thanks guys for your good Recommendations.
I decided to rebuilt my region, i will try to mix hystorical with modern.
The first improvement. Water and terrain mod... Smile
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Now i will rebuilt my two largest cities...




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Post by Daniel 15th September 2010, 11:52

Wow! That latest pic looks absolutely awesome!
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Post by Cyclone-1001 15th September 2010, 12:04

I see an improvement that made your nation 2x better.
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Post by Thomas 15th September 2010, 16:35

Much better, keep going with these rapid improvements and you'll be a member in no time! You also seem very dedicated, which will be very useful in deciding your "Yes" vote. Smile
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Post by Blakeway4 15th September 2010, 21:47

absolutely beautiful Laugh
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Post by Tyler 15th September 2010, 22:41

thats puuurddy Cheeky/Razz
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Post by Guest 16th September 2010, 02:22

Pictures from capital rebuilding...
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I am also working with sea wall lifting, but its seems to be harder than i thought... But i will try Laugh
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Post by Guest 16th September 2010, 02:28

Thomas wrote:By the way, where did you get the apartments in the top-right corner of the first picture? They're awesome.
Sorry but i really dont know where i get it.... Laugh
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Post by K50 Dude 16th September 2010, 02:34

Oh boy, that is a vast improvement!

Few more things...
1) Did you really get a terrain mod Cheeky/Razz it only looks like the cliff mod to me.
2) In the last picture, your areas around the river and administrative area look REALLY hilly, and really rough around the river.
3) I think you should get that river out, personally. I see the Japan River Project set there. Although the river looks nice too! (except for those cliffs, those need to go. Have you seen the "soften" tool in god mode? You can access the real god mode again by using CTRL+ALT+SHIFT+god mode button Wink )

I really like how you keep improving, I think a little more work and you are an easy yes from me!

Also, you are going to be asked this sooner or later.... how active do you think you will be? Smile

Lastly, watch the double post. There is an edit button for that use, the admins don't like double posts that much. Not your fault, you didn't know, just don't let that happen again Wink
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Post by Tyler 16th September 2010, 03:40

I don't think the cliffs really need to go.. around here there are rivers without nice "softened" beaches.. and in the southwest there are tons of those so it's not like it's a bad thing.
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Post by K50 Dude 16th September 2010, 03:59

Tyler wrote:I don't think the cliffs really need to go.. around here there are rivers without nice "softened" beaches.. and in the southwest there are tons of those so it's not like it's a bad thing.
but in the southwest there aren't cities by the rivers with cliffs
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